– Originally AndySng83's subtitle.
– Nameless, Sky, Broken Sword, Flying Snow, Highcliff, Springbrook, and Moon are changed to their transcription: Wu Ming, Chang Kong, Can Jian, Fei Xue, Gao Shan, Liu Shui, and Ru Yue (the sword of Broken Sword is still "Flying Snow Sword").
– "But I sense your hesitation." -> "Your killing intent is wavering?"
– "under heaven" is changed to "the people" (×5).
– Italicization: "To conquer all <i>the people</i>,"